Monday, March 12, 2012

We Made Them Dance Comments

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This is how I made you
I took the fibres of black
Spread the twinkling of my heart
Across your body
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Miroslava Odalovic
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Patti Masterman 12 April 2012

This is the most sublime writing; more thanks to Chevy again..he finds the best of the best! And that's you.. :)

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Rudeyard Kipling 16 March 2012

I like this poem and how your poems are yours alone...I mean you share them with your subject here obviously....but.......they are beautiful for their spirit and style....and a lot of other reasons I'm too lazy to articulate....but I was a diligent reader who wondered how you don't get more praise....not that you clamor for it like so many here.........anyway you probably know how good it is anyway...not that you're vain.....ok, I'll quit while I've run on to absurdity....but have meant it all...good poem....great feelings.....good luck.....now....the end.

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Wahab Abdul 13 March 2012

nice, nice very nice poem i like it

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Miroslava Odalovic

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