We Made Them Dance Poem by Miroslava Odalovic

We Made Them Dance



This is how I made you
I took the fibres of black
Spread the twinkling of my heart
Across your body
To make the most beautiful night in the world
I spinned it round and round
Made it dance the river dance
Made it dance the morning dance
Made it dance the evening dance
I made it dance

This is how you made me
You took the fibres of red
Spread the beating of your blood
Across my body
To make the most beautiful love in the world
You spinned it round and round
Made it dance the dance of your seed
Made it dance the dance of your touch
Made it dance the dance of your breath
You made it dance


That's why
The eagle was flying
The sea was foaming
The ground was singing
Children were laughing
Fires were burning
Across the hearths

We made them dance

Ovako sam te stvorila
Uzeh tkanice crnog
I prosuh treptaje svog srca niz tvoje tijelo
Da stvorim najljepšu noc ovoga svijeta
Zavrtjeh je ukrug ukrug
Da pleše ples rijeke
Da pleše ples jutra
Da pleše ples veceri
Da pleše

Ovako si me stvorio
Uze tkanice crvenog
Prosu otkucaj svoje krvi niz moje tijelo
Da stvoriš najljepšu ljubav ovoga svijeta
Zavrtio je ukrug ukrug
Da pleše ples tvog sjemena
Da pleše ples tvog dodira
Da pleše ples tvog daha
Da pleše

I zato je
Orao letio
More se pjenilo
Zemlja je pjevala
Djeca se smijala
I vatre ognjištem gorjele

Oni su plesali zbog nas

2010. (We made them dance)

©Miroslava Odalovic

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patti Masterman 12 April 2012

This is the most sublime writing; more thanks to Chevy again..he finds the best of the best! And that's you.. :)

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Rudeyard Kipling 16 March 2012

I like this poem and how your poems are yours alone...I mean you share them with your subject here obviously....but.......they are beautiful for their spirit and style....and a lot of other reasons I'm too lazy to articulate....but I was a diligent reader who wondered how you don't get more praise....not that you clamor for it like so many here.........anyway you probably know how good it is anyway...not that you're vain.....ok, I'll quit while I've run on to absurdity....but have meant it all...good poem....great feelings.....good luck.....now....the end.

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Wahab Abdul 13 March 2012

nice, nice very nice poem i like it

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