Weakness Poem by Prabir Gayen

Weakness

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Weakness
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Weakness is the cause of suffering,
It leads us to the path of Sin,
Weakness is Sin in itself,
Let us be above weakness,
Conquering our greedy Mind,
Mind is the soil that nurtures weakness.

As saga of Vigour and vitality said,
Let us make ourselves soar,
Looking our mind full of dust,
Let us conquer our dreaming minds.

Love makes us weak,
And love is the highest power in existence,
Without love life is a desert,
Love brings shower to make it a valley of flowers.

Love makes us weak to serve better,
It is simply sitting close to Divinity,
Weakness is divine and devil too.
Without Love where does weakness live?

Weakness is love upside down,
the meek substitute of love,
Weakness is like turning back to the Sun,
Crying by saying darkness, deep darkness.

Weakness is sin as it suffers distortion,
Love distorted becomes Lust,
Lust is simple closing the eyes,
Lust is love having no vision.

Weakness is synonymous to lust,
In lust weakness is born and bred up,
And in weakness lust becomes strong,
Love and lust are music with different tunes.

Let us face the truth opening our minds,
Mind being witnessed become Heart,
A place of joyous celebration,
And a placid lake where false dies.

Let us be true to our lives,
To existence for truth to dawn,
Weakness is simply clouds to disappear,
With the dawning it truth.

Let us face the reality however painful,
False is false and it has nothing to do,
Weakness is false and with awareness
It melts into nothingness.
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Weakness
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Srijita Mondal 09 February 2019

Aggressiveness is not strength.. aggression is perversion of power..it is weakness

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Srijita Mondal 09 February 2019

In weakness we suffer..in strength we share

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 09 February 2019

weakness is a stepping stone for strength when your hemoglobin is low you are weak they give you iron and so now you become strong never be weak in the hours of darkness the women scowl you know it

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Prabir Gayen 09 February 2019

Evaluate this poem from literary point of view dear poet... thanks

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Srijita Mondal 09 February 2019

Weakness and Strength are two opposite sides of a same coin

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 February 2019

The cause of suffering! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Jagdish Singh Ramána 10 February 2019

Weakness a poem of great importance. metaphors of weakness are sturdy and strike on reader's mind. the Holly Guru Granth Sahib G says, weakness is death.

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Meethi Mondal 09 February 2019

Let us face the reality however painful, False is false and it has nothing to do, Weakness is false and with awareness It melts into nothingness.

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Prabir Gayen 09 February 2019

Evaluate this poem from literary point of view dear poet the poet........ thanks

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 09 February 2019

Love and are music with different tunes. Jazib Kamalvi will challenge u PG TAKE CARE WILL YE

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