Well Poem by Narayanan Kutty Pozhath

Well

Rating: 4.9


I jumped into the well.
It was a free fall.
I got angry with myself
and jumped into the well.

Alas! I want to get out now.
Tried and tried, of no avail.
Just got angry and jumped.
Not able to get out now.

Sunday, April 29, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: well
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
We all become and angry and do something and latter repent.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Britte Ninad 20 May 2018

light verse. nice true 10+++

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Thank you for your comments Britte Ninad.

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Hazel Durham 12 May 2018

A very wise and thought provoking write and thanks for sharing! !

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Thank you Hazel for the kind words.

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Linda Hepner 08 May 2018

You can 'see' yourself - or hear - getting angry or losing yourself, and can't stop it. But here you've grabbed the moment of instant loss.

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It is true. Thank you.

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Buxton Shippy 07 May 2018

This poem teaches us the wisdom of hanger management. Love it...10

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Thank you Buxton for the kind words.

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Rajnish Manga 29 April 2018

Nice poem. Insightful and quite like being human. Thanks.

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Thank you Rajnish.

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Narayanan Kutty Pozhath

Narayanan Kutty Pozhath

Trissur, Kerala, India.
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