When I Fell In Love Poem by Narayanan Kutty Pozhath

When I Fell In Love

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Little did I know
that it was such a sin,
when I fell in love.
I had no preplan.
I never want to hurt
anyone whom I love.
It so happened
I fell in love.
Little did I know
that it was such a sin,
when I fell in love.

I knew the rules
of the game.
I chose my field.
I chose my job.
I chose my work place.
I did not know
that I cannot
choose my wife.
Little did I know
that it was such a sin
when I fell in love.

I didn't have
the right to choose
my wife, mine was to
love anyone
they choose for me.
It was how they
looked at love.
I was foolhearted.
Little did I know
that it was such a sin
when I fell in love.

I was made outcaste
I lost my heritage,
not by law but by deceit.
Everything is fair
in war and love.
It was war for them
and love for me.
Little did I know
that it was such a sin
when I fell in love.

Who were they?
My father, sister,
brothers and brother in law.
Relatives became spectators,
villagers became gossipmongers
I did not fight.
I lost the war without fighting.
People who fought
were more precious
than everything I lost.
Little did I know
that it was such a sin
when I fell in love.

Saturday, April 21, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: brother,father,love,war
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I married my wife who was from another religion. My family's response is shown here.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Buxton Shippy 07 May 2018

They sinned against you. You did not sin to fall in love but love is also a mystery and sometimes you get hurt while you practice to do it. Be encouraged.8 for this.

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I appreciate your words.

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Chinedu Dike 07 May 2018

Rich description vivacious with emotion. A sad tale of love depicting societal prejudice and virtuous hypocrisy told in eloquent finesse. As for me, the freedom to love is not negotiable. A powerful write-up with social awareness. Thanks for sharing Kutty and do remain blessed.

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Thank you for the kind words. Life has taught me it is not necessary that others approve what you do. But we must approve what we do.

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Narayanan Kutty Pozhath

Narayanan Kutty Pozhath

Trissur, Kerala, India.
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