What A Weight Poem by Seán O Muiríosa

What A Weight

Rating: 3.5


I felt the weight of my own presence today, freely,
As if I was being pulled towards the mushy earth
Like an wriggling worm after the wet and sudsy rain.

It was refreshing to be; feeling outside my head of locks
With no keys. Later on, the clouds dispersed and the sun,
It shone. And I was there to see it all. Every sweet ray.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ivy Christou 28 November 2005

I liked this Sean.. I feel the same some days, wanting to sense even the weakest sun ray.. excellent! HBH

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