What Are You Doing Daddy? Poem by Mantu Mahakul

What Are You Doing Daddy?

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Oh daddy what are you doing?
At this moment I am wooing.
You come and dandle me soon,
Fondling with wisdom give boon.

Where are you now oh my daddy?
I am going to harvest my crop paddy.
Festival is coming ahead of my mind,
I shall prepare cake of your like kind.

I am waiting for learning a new sum,
When will you come and press thumb?
I do not know how to walk in a path,
I too do not know my aim of real birth.

Only you are alone super my father,
Holey nature nurtures us with nectar.
Better I do understand to know you,
Ahead you can bring for me time new.

© Mantu Mahakul,23 December 2014. All rights reserved.

Saturday, October 29, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: father,father and son,life,love,spiritual
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 21 March 2020

WOW! I still remember ANGEL MIA LOVE and ELEANOR PRINCE from Poetfreak our mutual beautiful poem site now already long gone (since 30 December 2016) . This is ridiculous beautiful and true devotional, dear Mantu.. You will come to know the heavenly father better each day, He will guide you not to go astray and so is your true daddy at home too. Only One God we pray too. We will walk that One True Path. Very Impressive!

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Mantu Mahakul 29 October 2016

picture of honest harriet xsooo lovely. 1 Jan 2015 by honest harriet | Reply picture of Angel mia LOVE xLovely lovely lovely... Abba where are you in deed..ty for such spiritual that adorns you with God's wisdom..tfs 25 Feb 2015 by Angel mia LOVE | Reply picture of eleanor prince xsome lovely sentiments here of natural adoration of a son for a father, mentor, friend 16 Mar 2015 by eleanor prince | Reply

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Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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