What Could Go Wrong. Poem by Invisible Scouser

What Could Go Wrong.

Rating: 5.0


I caught her eyes from across the room
she must have a boyfriend, i start to assume.
I took a chance and flashed a smile
I started to worry she would run a mile.
but to my suprise she smiled right back.
i think am having a panic attack.
I walked towards her to say hello
as i got closer she started to glow.
Her eyes started to twinkle like a star in the night
I've never seen anything shine so bright.
fancy a coffee i started to mumble
as i tripped and fell, i started to stumble.
she put out her arms to try to catch me
but a face full of horror, is all she could see.
nose first i hit the floor with a almighty thud
i started to stand am covered in blood.
my nose is broken, i started to shout
help me sit down before i black out.
she sat me down and gave me a tissue
i couldnt stop thinking what is my issue.
am usually good with the format of dating
and here i am now seconds from fainting.
i said thank you as i stood to leave
but to my suprise i couldn't believe.
she asked for my phone to give me her number
i held it out, but i couldn't help wonder.
would it of worked if i just said hello
i guessing the answer, we will never know.
5 years later and we are engaged
still so beautiful, she just hasn't aged.
i guess what am saying is dont be afraid
because i met my girl, while getting first aid.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kim Barney 21 March 2022

A fun tale. Cowboy Ron told me about this one. Very nicely done.

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Invisible Scouser 29 March 2022

thank you : )

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Cowboy Ron Williams 21 March 2022

Highly entertaining. I gave it five stars.

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Invisible Scouser 29 March 2022

Thanks : )

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Unnikrishnan E S 20 March 2022

Loved this story, narrated so brilliantly, with the undercurrent of subtle humour.5 *s

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Invisible Scouser 29 March 2022

a little fun lol

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