What Did I Want? Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

What Did I Want?

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What did I want?
Prayers to chant
Name to worship
Tears to weep

I went for nothing
Yet missed something
It was just a desire
I want man to admire

Who can stand by me?
Make me feel free
Give me shed like tree
And run to me when I say one, two and three

It is just joke
Yet I smoke
And form cloud
To speak loud

I am little queen
yet very keen
to have kingdom of my own
well spread over and known

I want prince who looks beautiful
protector and very much successful
I shall remain happy forever
But let that happen slower

Let me think little
And finally settle
In dream like situation
To enjoy with its continuation

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 August 2013

What did I want? Prayers to chant

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 August 2013

author Kesha Finesse Murphy Okay King I see you flowing...

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 August 2013

Maria Jaqueline Singlan Sosa likes this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Dawn Greer 10 August 2013

I really like this poem, it is unique!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 August 2013

Great! Jacqueline Mendoza5 minutes ago Nice flow Comment +1 The thoughts of a child

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 August 2013

Jon Hooper3 minutes ago It comes across as the thoughts of a little girl in a world of her own making filled with castles, rainbows and unicorns, Nice.. Comment +1 Very nice

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 August 2013

Vasu Deva Murthy Hampapuram7 minutes ago Nice rhyme and good

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 August 2013

Maria Jaqueline Singlan Sosa likes this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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