Tuesday, April 18, 2017

What Did My Father Think Comments

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Working for the man every day
Getting up to the grind in every way
He stayed to the task for his family
As we remember him so easily
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Paul Warren
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Buried Alive 18 April 2017

Your wonderful last 2 lines say it all. His duty to his own family took precedence over his own personal dreams enabling his children to realize theirs . I think that is what he was thinking. Beautiful poem

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John Ahern 18 April 2017

Well written, Paul. a poem that jolts us (me) back to our (my) Father of few words.

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ADELAIDE, SOUTH AUSTRALIA
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