sleep at night
a peaceful sleep
drifting into dreams
not talk
not real
see pictures of my family
drifting slowly on by
all that display
darkness come
see my class mates
see.my crush
run away
no use
not the same feelings
as I love him with
unfortunately
he doesn't follow
as I wish he would
darkness falls again
on top of a building
running towards the edge
fly off fly with the birds
then I fall
darkness falls
in a flip lacking put
in a flaming pit
burning my skin off
wakes up
still can feel
just a dream
just a dream
How we are fascinated by dreams. I love the echo, the fragile reassurance at the end. Great!
Iliked this poem it was really good i am very intrested in dreams and i actully felt as though i was in the dream great poem
thats beautiful, the way you portray yous dream is very nice, keep it up.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The manner in which you have spelled your dream is captivating ! Lovely!