Pithy Marvel

What Does Nature Feel Like - Poem by Pithy Marvel

When my eyes were brighter
I saw the spectrum
of colorful blessings
filling my atomic structure

now my primary sense
is touch
what is nature to you?

I feel nature
pine needle points
gooey sap
smooth rocks
weighty rocks
pointed rocks
jagged edges
the sting of redwood
under skin
I feel the bite
of the insects
the hairs of a bears
hide stuck to crusty
I feel the cold water
rushing next to hot rock
I feel dust
grains and gravel
I feel dew on leaves

I fill my senses
by feeling

Topic(s) of this poem: nature

Comments about What Does Nature Feel Like by Pithy Marvel

  • Liza Sudina (11/11/2015 4:24:00 AM)

    a very intense and fresh poem! Rocks are really impressive! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, November 10, 2015

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