What Enthralls You....... Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

What Enthralls You.......

Rating: 4.9


What enthralls you to be proud?
Is that shouting more or speaking loud?
Let my words and appreciation speak
No other thoughts simply sneak

What best can make you feel?
Is that you keep moving wheel?
Does your work make chest to expand?
More and more public demand

I feel proud for not being self
Has not come without your help
As a poor, you never distanced,
Kept me near despite instanced

It was your gracious act
Was a reason clear and fact
It was not a simple tact
You always laughed and didn’t react

You did not move but remain among
Journey was hard and very very long
Never uttered a word simply to confuse
Poured energy only to infuse

Such a wonderful soul to feel proud
Whose steps make my spirit sound?
Fame and name gather round
Proud to be your friend and move around

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Radha Seth 24 August 2009

You did not move but remain among Journey was hard and very very long Never uttered a word simply to confuse.....10

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Ketan Rajgor 25 August 2009

It was your gracious act Was a reason clear and fact....10

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Kamli Kamal 25 August 2009

What enthralls you to be proud? Is that shouting more or speaking loud? Let my words and appreciation speak No other thoughts simply sneak.....10

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Vijay Suwarnkar 26 August 2009

vWhat best can make you feel? Is that you keep moving wheel? ....10

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Lalvani Rekha 26 August 2009

What best can make you feel? Is that you keep moving wheel? .....10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 October 2019

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Suresh Vakil 30 August 2009

What best can make you feel? Is that you keep moving wheel? Does your work make chest to expand? More and more public demand.......10

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Santoksingh Jadeja 30 August 2009

What enthralls you to be proud? Is that shouting more or speaking loud? ......10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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