Konjit Berhane

Rookie (SePTeMBer,18 1983 DEath i Believe i am ImMorTal / a S M a R a)

What I Deserve...! - Poem by Konjit Berhane

As usual the sun rises
‘N it has to set
Life goes on…. as
It will never end…

Now I stopped and realize
I have done something….
So huge in size….

I have sinned…
Beyond God could forgive
Do I deserve to die or to live?

If I deserve to die
In to the deepest ocean
Let me dive

If I deserve to live
Let me sleep all year through
But don’t forget to wake me up
On Christmas Eve

26 March 2006

Comments about What I Deserve...! by Konjit Berhane

  • Deanna More (6/2/2006 5:30:00 PM)

    Konjit, this is a very ponderous poem! In fact, one could ponder thought for hours, trying to decide if these words could be relative to their own lives.
    (I chuckled a little when I visualized my despicable SPIDER saying these lines aloud, as if he was having a Bad-Conscience attack! : -)

    Great poem! (10 - for you!)

    Deanna xx
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  • (5/12/2006 7:26:00 AM)

    Quirky poem and a funny ending that made me laugh. (Report) Reply

  • (5/4/2006 10:19:00 AM)

    I don't think that anyone ever deserves to die. Even those who have committed evil crimes (in sure you haven't lol) should live, face up to the consequences of their actions! Anyway off me soap box lol! Moyaxx (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 28, 2006

Poem Edited: Monday, May 1, 2006

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