What Is My Destiny? Poem by Sylvia Chidi

What Is My Destiny?

Rating: 4.5

What is my destiny?
What is your destiny?
Can it be changed at all?
Or is it another hallucination
A figment of our imagination,
of what life should hold in stock for us

If destiny would walk our paths
I would say to destiny
Why have you come all this way, just to lead us astray?

Copyright 2005 - Sylvia Chidi

M Asim Nehal 05 March 2016

So many thought provoking questions............

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Jay Press 31 October 2006

I like this, it staes the flaws in destinys own plan, and questions existence.

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Mickey Pig Knuckles 14 January 2006

Oh Sylvia, what a poem of reality you have composed here as yes ones destiny can be quite confusing at times but there is a reason for everything and most of the time we do not understand the reasoning. I was drawn into your poetic works by the title and now so glad I was as you have a wonderful writing style that captures and holds your audience through each word. Now, I must Thank You for giving us all a little of you and especially your glowing talent of poetry. Wonderful poem. As I ready myself to part I have a very small request for you. I really want to ask that you please keep your creative pens ink flowing so your wonderful poetry keeps growing. Your Reading Fan, Mickey Pig Knuckles :)

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Gina Onyemaechi 14 January 2006

I like the ending to this: a humorous but worthy probe!

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