Wednesday, September 10, 2014

What Is My Fault? Comments

Rating: 5.0

I know, you don't like me,
Don't want to see my face,
I am like you, see the contours
Don't hitch, Don't shy?
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Aftab Alam
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Salini Nair 11 September 2014

nice..............................

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Geetha Jayakumar 10 September 2014

Heartfelt poem, touching indeed. It seems that pains are poured out from your heart. Loved the way you presented it. Thanks for sharing with us.

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Buxton Shippy 10 September 2014

I like the way you addressed intolerance. I rate this a perfect 10. I am doing well my friend.

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