What Nature Has Not Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

What Nature Has Not

Rating: 5.0


I have never responded
Seen with favor and corresponded
That love is to be met with love
Gesture is to be shown and believed

What makes us to wear grin?
When fields are turning into green
The earth is gearing up to big change
We are still wrapped in rage

What nature has not given?
Tolerance, favor, water and air all forgotten
Come on stupid human creature
You are sealing your future

What happens if you smile little?
What prevents you to help in struggle?
It is just adding of water drop
To turn entire water in sea dump

I have believed and advocated
Not as social reformer but stated
Peace and harmony at mind is only answer
If this message can be picked by fewer

We have an attitude to swallow everything
Like big fish grabs smaller one for eating
To prevent from entering protected zone
Where everything is created exclusively and done

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 December 2013

Re: What nature has not (Score: 1) by Carousel on Thursday, December 05,2013 (05: 01: 42) The message is clearly stated and the poem has a rhythm. I would have rated this piece but for the rhyme that is inconsistent. Regards John Reply to This | Parent | Delete Re: What nature has not (Score: 1) welcome n regards. all my poem have rhythms. it is part of my life and aim too

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 04 December 2013

very true Kisha Hoover22 minutes ago our brains are not as open as they should be Comment +1 Nice

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 04 December 2013

Matt Baines24 minutes ago I enjoyed your words. Keep it up

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 04 December 2013

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 04 December 2013

I have never responded Seen with favor and corresponded

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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