What You Did Poem by Alyssa Rieper

What You Did

Rating: 4.0


They say I’m crazy, no not I
I used to think that till today went by
You said you loved me and I believed
Although I see I was much deceived
You held my hand and looked in my eyes
I returned your glance not seeing your lies
I wasn’t insane way back then
Not until I saw your sin
All the times that you were gone
The relationship was not where it belonged
I know that you were not at work
So behind you, I decided to lurk
I found you with another girl
I saw you kiss, my fist curled
That’s when I went insane
Forever, there, I shall remain

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Wheeler 10 May 2008

pretty good. a bit 'thrown together' looking, but i rated it a 9. almost 10

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