What You Don'T See Poem by Nyl Revol

What You Don'T See

Rating: 3.8


You don't see my eyes
Fill with tears
You don't see my mind aging
Like its been years.

You don't see my arms
Wrapped around my chest
Holding myself together
Forgetting all the rest.

You don't see the ache in my head
The pain in my heart
The sorrow in my life
And that's just the start.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Josh Fleming 17 December 2009

All her poems are about me, I miss her so much. We were in love and her boyfriend new it, rage consumed him and led him to kill her. =`(

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Penney Cooper 04 November 2009

wow really pulled me in with this one. just the start-i hope to learn more :)

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Infamous Ashley 04 November 2009

very beautiful, sad, wonderful, great job

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Stacey Watts 04 November 2009

very beautiful well written piece. It was very emotional and sad. Excellent job.

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Hadi Hakkai Renato P. 04 November 2009

beautiful, very deep

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