When All Is Lost...Sit In The Shadows In Pain... Poem by iron panda 23

When All Is Lost...Sit In The Shadows In Pain...



Launching grenades
& fire cannons
wars with swords
& back-stabbing with daggers
pushing & shoving
& falling down stairs
glasses breaking
no loving
flames fly through the air
lies & betrayal
sadness so real
when all is lost...
sit in the shadows in pain...

~IP23

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

I think this is a very good representation of inter-personal conflict as well as societal and worldly conflict and war. Idk which you were going for. Any way, very good poem.

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