Monday, August 28, 2017

When At Night I Am Asleep Comments

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When at night I am asleep
it's as if God stands at His working bench
when dreams about the things of life
do constantly go through my mind
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Gert Strydom
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Jazib Kamalvi 28 August 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Gert. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks.

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Johannesburg, South Africa
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