When I Don'T Write[short] Poem by Gabriella Franco

When I Don'T Write[short]



when i don't write
I feel like
the world is
crashing down

when i don't write
I find
Smiles turn to
frowns

I never thought
not feeling
could hurt more
than hurting

I never knew
Numbness
could scare me
more than anything

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
John Tansey 15 August 2006

You captured the essence of a poem with phrases falling into the next, in short lyrical melodies and in an economy of words, as should be in poetry you managed to reveal nore with less... Very nicely done!

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