Gabriella Franco

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9 Unworthy Tears - Poem by Gabriella Franco

9 unworthy tears down my face
9 unworthy tears leave a dark trace
The tears aren't really comming from my eyes
They're comming from the soul that's inside

I'm all scrambled up, don't know which way is up
I can't stand your drama, I've had enough
I can't spell, sing or write. I can't even think
Theres a heartbreak up ahead. I'm on the brink

I trusted you with my heart
I let you play with it because
I thought maybe the 'like' we had
Just might turn to love

I gave it a chance, let myself go
And I just wanted you to know
You have activated my fears
And now I'm cryin 9 unworthy tears

1 is for the beginning
2 is for the end
3 is for believing
You were my best friend

4 is for what we shared
5 is for... well i don't know
but 6 is for 'I thought you cared'
7, i'm cryin and let it show

I don; t want you to know you hurt me
That's why #8 sucks
But #9 is the hardest tear
9 is for the trust.

Comments about 9 Unworthy Tears by Gabriella Franco

  • (3/15/2007 10:11:00 PM)

    Wow. I loved the ryhming in this one. It seems to kind of playfully display the hurt and the pain while TOTALLY displaying the message. Loved it, as usual (Report) Reply

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  • (8/28/2006 7:23:00 PM)

    ok, kiddo, story time. this reminds me of the time i cried like 8 or 9 times last year because this guy that liked me didn't want to be with just kinda hit again when i read this. *pats on shoulder* you're not the only one, kid.

    eni da kid
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  • (8/28/2006 1:03:00 AM)

    I know that feeling, and you've brought it out superbly in this poem. How in a minute everything touched me with this one~!

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  • (8/4/2006 8:01:00 AM)

    Well, I understand completely. I can't even begin to describe how much that poem hit me. I almost cried it was really well written. (Report) Reply

  • (6/12/2006 5:34:00 PM)

    That was a good one... :) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, June 11, 2006

Poem Edited: Sunday, June 18, 2006

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