When I Look At Your Eyes... Poem by Ravi Sathasivam

When I Look At Your Eyes...



When I look at your eyes, my mind engulf with love
Your eyes show me the love that showers for me
Your eyes show me the affection that longs for me
Your eyes show me the care that needs for me
My tears stop when I look at your eyes
My worries go away when I look at your eyes
My pains vanish when I look at your eyes
I can see the truth of love that lies on your eyes
I can see the faith of soul that holds on your eyes
I can see the warm of life that lives on your eyes
Let me see my love through your eyes and this will
make me feel that my life with you is great for ever.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shashendra Amalshan 31 July 2009

Well I ll tell you this much sir, in my poetry collection there are few poems I wrote with so much emotions for two people I admire most.. And I v not got a positive reply yet from any one.. I feel you v written this with lots emotions.... feelings seems to ooze out.. The diction is simple, but I feel the simplicity says it all.... a genuine poem, written from heart With love shan

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