Ravi Sathasivam


My Love, I Am Crying For Your Love......

Poem by Ravi Sathasivam

You said to me that you will be there on that day
but when that day came then you were not there for me
So much love showered and so many promises were made
but nothing worked on my way because you had gone
My love, I am crying for you because my love turned blue

The heaven stolen you from me and left the memories only
Though your soul vanished in the sky but my love never dies for you
I tell those angels how much I love you and care for you
and ask them to make your soul always happy till I come to you
My love, I am crying for you because my love turned blue

Looking at your photos and wish you were here with me
Crying for your endless love which become the end of story
I will not see you again but your memories will stay for ever
Now my heart fighting against a raw pain for the lost of my love
My love, I am crying for you because my love turned blue


Comments about My Love, I Am Crying For Your Love...... by Ravi Sathasivam

  • susheela Shiju (12/7/2018 11:07:00 AM)

    loved this piece of workKeep writing(Report)Reply

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  • Hira AkhtarHira Akhtar (7/10/2018 11:22:00 AM)

    Beautiful! I remembered my mamma while reading this.Her soul has been taken away in heavens but my love will never die for her!
    Everyone understands the meanings of thinga from their experiences, I took it as this.😊(Report)Reply

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  • melissa (6/13/2018 1:09:00 PM)

    Add a comment. i really ,really love your poems(Report)Reply

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  • henry (6/13/2018 1:07:00 PM)

    Add a comment. i love your poem about Sorry,I Am Sorry My Love(Report)Reply

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  • memory (6/13/2018 1:03:00 PM)

    Add a comment. nice poem(Report)Reply

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  • Akhtar JawadAkhtar Jawad (6/7/2018 1:03:00 AM)

    I will not see you again but your memories will stay for ever
    A touching poem.(Report)Reply

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  • ihsan Aziz (5/6/2018 4:42:00 AM)

    Lovely poetry and meaningful is my soul(Report)Reply

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  • Sylvaonyema UbaSylvaonyema Uba (4/17/2018 8:50:00 AM)

    Set in a stanza of three
    Good use of the quintet device.

    Sylva Onyema Uba(Report)Reply

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  • Phiwokuhle Mpendulo MananaPhiwokuhle Mpendulo Manana (4/10/2018 10:59:00 AM)

    Sorrowful poem, indeed. But the truth.(Report)Reply

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  • Naila RaisNaila Rais (3/20/2018 4:32:00 AM)

    Sad to hear.... Really heart touching poem❤️❤️.... I love your last line... Keep courage... Rate my poem too Let me rise..
    Naila(Report)Reply

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  • Aya Sunga Askert (11/29/2017 12:52:00 PM)

    Now I am crying for you..so touching. Thank you for this poem(Report)Reply

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  • Dr Dillip K SwainDr Dillip K Swain (10/6/2017 2:27:00 AM)

    The intensity of love has been brilliantly depicted through a precise few words..! A very nice creation..! I loved the piece..! ! A wonderful poem..Enjoyed reading it(Report)Reply

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  • Dr Tony BrahminDr Tony Brahmin (6/29/2017 6:59:00 AM)

    So much love showered and so many promises were made
    but nothing worked on my way because you had gone

    my love i am crying for you, for your presence. memories. sweet now turns into pain. i cant suffer........ love and its mysteries painted so well in your beautiful poem. love, intensity, memories, sense of loss, hope in hoplessness. thank you dear poet. tony(Report)Reply

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  • Louise McgowanLouise Mcgowan (10/20/2016 4:07:00 AM)

    Loved reading your poem,Sad but Happy(Report)Reply

    ginger(12/1/2017 11:01:00 PM)

    Sad and not happy.

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  • Helen Cooper (12/13/2005 6:32:00 AM)

    This brought tears to my eyes. Thankyou.(Report)Reply

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  • Kaylin Klein (11/26/2005 10:04:00 PM)

    That's sad... It reminds me of my sister. You have great talent keep on writing.(Report)Reply

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  • Jessica Nothing (4/15/2005 2:45:00 AM)

    HEY Ravi how are you>>>
    i just LOVE your poem so much i think your poem should get Published.. i have never read a sad poem like this you Daserve 10 out or 10 good job and keep it up
    alots of love your poem reader(Report)Reply

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  • Jessica Nothing (4/15/2005 2:41:00 AM)

    hey Ravi Sathasivam how are you>>
    i JUST LOVE(Report)Reply

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  • Dave De Haas (2/21/2005 11:43:00 PM)

    I have never seen such sadness in a poem.
    It give me a image of a man who had gone to war and never cam back.
    thought a respected addition from soe one who know what it is like to lose some one said to me.

    'do not be sad that i am gone, be happy that there is no more pain for me and i will see you again.'(Report)Reply

    ginger(12/1/2017 11:03:00 PM)

    Some hopes!

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  • Liz Cooper (1/24/2005 1:31:00 PM)

    dude, this poems so sad! But its killer. XO to Ravi!(Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 8, 2004

Poem Edited: Tuesday, April 13, 2010


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