When I'm With You Poem by Rinalyn Bonajos

When I'm With You

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A friend is someone who can understand you,
That could sense how thing you used to do,
Could this be the reason to stay attached?
Or just a way for you to trust that friend so much?


You and I will always be a treasure,
Helping one another in times of pain and pressure,
But things sometimes went so wrong,
Not you nor I knows where to get along.


Misunderstanding to a small thing
Yet, destructing and even annoying,
For a friend like you
Deserve a love the way I want to show.


Each day, were getting together,
Building memories that no one could ever wonder,
Every single moment, we also had a strife,
But it adds also a flavor for one's life.


One day we will be leaving this chapter,
One day we will be apart to one another,
But, one thing is for sure,
There will be times to get adventure.


The spirit of friendship for me is the best,
I can count on you among the rest,
No worry if there's something wrong,
For it wouldn't last for so long.

Tuesday, October 24, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: friendship
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Moment of you and me.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kristel May Waskin 28 November 2017

Was this during the start up week? A farewell that you can't say? To write is your only way? Well, all I can is you are such an awesome poet. You are good in playing with indigenous words that even I can't understand unless I will search for it. So proud of you. I know you will have a good future for you have amazing talents that even me hoping for.

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Rinalyn Bonajos 28 November 2017

I guess this was the time I wrote this poem, even published it but I never put in my mind to say anything even that word FAREWELL. Thank you for that compliment. I haven't that what you've said indigenous words because I am not good enough but I am trying to be expressive through writing poems.

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Rinalyn Bonajos 28 November 2017

I guess this was the time I wrote this poem, even published it but I never put my mind to say anything even that word FAREWELL. Thank you for that compliment. I haven't that what you've said indigenous words because I am not good enough but I am trying to be expressive through writing poems!

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Dr Antony Theodore 12 November 2017

Each day, were getting together, Building memories that no one could ever wonder, Every single moment, we also had a strife, But it adds also a flavor for one's life... a very fine love poem full of hope and romance........ thank you dear poetess. tony

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Rinalyn Bonajos 28 November 2017

Thank Dr.Tony for that compliment it inspires me to write even more!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 October 2017

There should be mutual understanding, love and caring nature in friendship. A strong and faithful friendship is strength of humanity. An interesting poem is shared here...10

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Rinalyn Bonajos 12 November 2017

Yes surely! Friends will be strengthen if there should be trust that bound between them. I believe that everyone could relate this one.

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