Then I Answered Poem by Rinalyn Bonajos

Then I Answered

Rating: 5.0


"Are you insane? "
No, I'm just dealing now the pain,
"Are you mad? "
No, I am just sad and it's my BAD!

Do you find your day so well?
How would I if I am feeling unwell?
Do you understand what you were saying?
How would I if I am unhappy of what is currently happening?

What makes you happy?
The people that cares for me,
What makes you sad, though?
The person that has left me had been a while ago.

When will the time to look after everything else?
Maybe not now but I know it will be done somewhere else,
When will be the time to get close to you?
Would it be possible, just tell me so.

I really miss you so bad, so, so bad,
Perhaps, you are already at one's side,
Who knows what deep and heartfelt longing?
No comment but I am still hoping.

Wednesday, November 29, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: response
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 30 November 2017

Missing is so bad and sad. But really amazingly you have answered everything here. A brilliant poem is shared./ 10

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Rinalyn Bonajos 30 November 2017

Thank you so much Mr.Mahakul!

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Jazib Kamalvi 30 November 2017

A refined poetic imagination, Rinalyn Bonajos. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Rinalyn Bonajos 30 November 2017

Thank you Mr.Kamalvi! Okay I'll try to find out and read.

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