When I Want, I Can Poem by Tender Heart

When I Want, I Can

Rating: 5.0


Don't fall, stay strong,
Try your best, believe in 'you'.
If you are told you are wrong,
Give it another try, it will do.



Don't give up & go cry,
Never believe you are weak.
Just swing your wings & you'll fly,
& finally you'll reach what you seek.



You'll face hard stumbling blocks.
You'll be asked, & to answer you'll stutter.
You'll believe in things & get some shocks.
You'll be speechless with no words to utter.



But again, of yourself you must get hold.
Live 4 your dreams & never let go.
Even if you're in the wild feeling so cold,
Say: 'I will reach, i believe, i know'.



You'll be your self when you reach your goal.
Satisfied to the core when you find your role.
You are great coz u tried & broke a 1000 wall.
You recognize who you are, now you gain your soul.



Now, you have this trust, now you'll never fall.
You believe you can reach, so you're standing tall.
Go help others now, go i hear them call.
They saw you achieve, now go help them all.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Saadat Tahir 13 February 2012

the abab...classical theme is quite well doen the rhymes work very well u hv a nice piece there :) cheers

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 15 June 2011

The poem is extremely didactic in nature. It has a very strong structure. Plenty of useful advice are here to shape your life. A perfect 10. Thanks for sharing.....

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Alexandria, Egypt
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