Wednesday, May 16, 2018

When It Is Dawn Comments

Rating: 5.0

When the faint light from the east
Grazes the green grass of the lands
Tumbling down from the hilltop
To settle down across moist sands
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Anil Kumar Panda
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Kumarmani Mahakul 17 May 2018

When dawn arrives tender light falls on grass and shines with beauty of hope. This poem catches a rich imagery basing on perception of dawn and this is excellently expressed. Night hides and birds fly eagerly with new vision and freedom....10

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Anil Kumar Panda 05 June 2018

Feeling inspired by your positive review Sir. Gratitude.

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Rajnish Manga 16 May 2018

Exquisitely beautiful landscape created with words with some fascinating scenes at dawn e.g. 'When a cool wind.... sings a song.... Night goes hiding to take some rests'. Thanks.

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Anil Kumar Panda 05 June 2018

My regards Sir for such a wonderful comment.

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