When Its Time Its Your Time Comments

take my stance. or make my stance? i was going to mention the missing (i think) apostrophes in the title, but i then saw that you apparently don't bother with those marks. poetic license? in a hurry? but i will mention youre[sic]; is that an australian spelling of your? and when you put e on your and leave the apostrophe from you're, you leave this poet less time to just enjoy this fine poem. i really liked it. thanks for sharing. ;) yes, i guess dave walker's comment rings true.

A powerful poem, like it.