When Life Was Simple Poem by Lore Me34

When Life Was Simple

Rating: 5.0


When life was simple
Was when I was in mother's womb?
but wait we were poor so my mom got no prenatal care.

When life was simple
Was when my mother gave birth to me...?
but wait I was born premature with a collapsed lung unable to breathe.

When life was simple
Was when I was 6 month old?
but wait that was when my mom found out I have Cerebral Palsy.

When life was simple
Was when I was about ten?
but wait that when I was called the little cripple boy who has no friends.

When life was simple
I was about 26
but wait that when my mother scoffed at my poetic gift.

Well I'm 41 now
and throughout the years there's one thing I have learned
Life is never simple.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
<font color =fusha>Amy 16 September 2008

i agree, life isnt simple- but thats what keeps us going on, being able to take risks and challenge yourself- great write :)

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Stacey Watts 16 September 2008

Life is never simple. You are very talented. I think this poem deserves a 10.

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Red Blooded Black Hearted 16 September 2008

People can be cruel and life even crueler. Hope things get better. Your poem is amazing.

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