Saturday, August 6, 2005

When The Past Was Draged Forward438 Comments

Rating: 4.8

when the past has been
draged forward, your find
a child, alone and defeated.
when the past has been draged
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DAVID GERARDINO
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Joe Prieto 10 August 2005

nice

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Poetry Hound 06 August 2005

Very intense, almost surreal. I assume you intentionally misspelled 'dragged, ' though I don't know why.

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Mary Nagy 06 August 2005

Wow, I didn't expect that ending! Very intense poem David. Nice job. Sincerely, Mary

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