When The Sun Sets Poem by Stacy Bea

When The Sun Sets



When the sun sets
darkness sets in
a new world opens

In our heart
on a bad day darkness sets in
we are changed

Darkness within the heart
does not mean we are evil
just means we have changed

i slept one night and the next
i was different
my friends are different

Love-Dark-hate-Light
what is the difference...

When the sun sets our souls change
we are never the same person
the ember light on the herizon changes all

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mark Nwagwu 29 May 2008

sunset is an illusion - the sun never really sets. and so we change with the light for the sun is ever there for us. As you say: love, dark hate, light. I hope, not necessarily in that order. let's leave hate out, whatever may or may not be angry, yes, please do not hate. we shall wake to the sun

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Anggie Servian 29 April 2008

A nice poem with dark atmosphere. A unique combination. I think your poem is about a person who changed since sth bad happened in his or her life. Well, we always wants and likes the sun to shine. But as the sun sets, a new day will come, and it may be a better one. Best wishes...

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