Dan Brown

Rookie - 62 Points (20.02.1988 / Newcastle-Upon-Tyne, UK)

When To Say I Love You - Poem by Dan Brown

Three little words,
that mean so much.
Surpassing sex and
every gentle touch.

Three little words,
can define your relations.
Three little words,
with so many expectations.

So often used in ignorance,
but shouldn’t be taken so lightly.
Watching hearts break from misguided trust,
is upsettingly unsightly.

I fear I use it too generally,
and I’m killing off it’s exclusivity.
Announcing it to someone is a special thing,
and not a day-to-day activity.

I fear I won’t know
when its right to say,
three little words,
“I am gay”


Comments about When To Say I Love You by Dan Brown

  • (6/2/2006 2:07:00 PM)


    Somehow you have created a sharp contrast between the I Love You and the ending - very dramatically done. - chuck (Report) Reply

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  • (5/8/2006 3:55:00 PM)


    The end was a complete twist. Lmeao. I wasnt expecting that good job.. keep on keepin on lmeao im giddyish to day.
    Love,
    Missy
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, May 2, 2006

Poem Edited: Monday, May 8, 2006


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