Sunday, February 18, 2018

When We Meet Comments

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I can hear your footsteps
As you climb up the stairs
I feel good to inhale the
Essence of your dark hairs
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Anil Kumar Panda
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Susan Williams 18 February 2018

Those lines brought a delightful sense of anticipation! ! ! Aided by the words I can hear repeated- I love the art of repetition that adds so much to the building of atmosphere. Well done.

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Anil Kumar Panda 19 February 2018

My heartfelt thanks for giving time to my poem and sweet comment.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 February 2018

A sweet poem... lovely expression... loaded with imagery. 10

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Anil Kumar Panda 19 February 2018

Thanks very much Sir for beautiful comment.

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