When You Dance Poem by Ahmad Ali Shah Mashal

When You Dance

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When you dance,
the heart of the universe
goes out of control
constellations forget their choreography,
and comets pause mid-flight
to watch you spin.

The moon loses count of its tides,
and time skips a breath,
as your feet sketch galaxies
into the silence of the night.

Each gesture
a prayer of motion,
each twirl
a whispered spell,
pulling the cosmos
into the orbit of your soul.

When you dance
the universe doesn't just watch...
it listens.

Thursday, February 12, 2026
Topic(s) of this poem: dance
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ahmad Ali Shah Mashal 18 May 2026

Bundles of thanks 🙏

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Leria Hawkins 12 March 2026

Lovely poem, I wanted to dance along with every line!

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Brooke Renwick 12 March 2026

This is very good!

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Bundles of thanks 🙏

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