When you look
at me, I want to
tear my patience
in pieces.
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Wow. wonderful poem. Neela. I liked the way you presented it. Loved reading it...
There is an inner conflict very much to be addressed and the lovers here have to go miles before they understand each other. Let the ice be broken first. Good rendering by the poet and fine and authentic confirmation of the stand taken the speaker make it a fine poem.
Nice poem and the event is so nice for the two hidden desire and demand Like MADHAVI KUTTY nice
Madhavi Kutty aka Kamala Das is a great poetess.I adore her.I didn't read much of her writes.I'll read soon.Thanks a lot.