When You See This Letter Poem by HB Rita

When You See This Letter

Rating: 5.0


When you see this letter,
I might be in sleep forever
But don't bother to feel alone
I will be always there for you
Like a trees cast long shadows.
Never feel depressed,
Because I will be there to cheer you up.
Never shed tears for me,
Because I will crave for those lovely eyes
When you feel like touching me,
Open the northern windows
Let the wind blew out all the deemed lights
Close your eyes and feel the breeze
Smell the darkest night
I am right there; in the atmosphere
And remember,
When we used to be hang together for nothing
When we had good time together
When we used to suck in each other's pain
And kiss restlessly on lops or forehead
With love and care!
Close your eyes baby,
You will find me right next to your shoulder
Just close your eyes…
Don't let them open
And feel me with deepest desire.

Sunday, March 31, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: depression
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 31 March 2019

Great poetic feelings, Rita. But I think there should be some rhyme or metre in a poem. Am I right? Thanks for sharing.

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HB Rita 01 April 2019

Thanks for your review. It is a free verse writing. Again, you can give me some idea of connecting the poem with metre if you have tie. I will gladly accept any suggestions or tips.

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