When Your Poems I Was Translating – Poem by Liza Sud

When Your Poems I Was Translating –



When your poems I was translating –
Then I felt how our souls together
 Were combined in one line, very lengthy,
 Flowing in the breathing of your air.

 Since that time I was by you surrounded,
 By your warm and almost milky sphere
 And when slowly in it I drowned –
Happiness was born in subtle heaven.

Tuesday, October 6, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: poems
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pamela Sinicrope 06 October 2015

That's a cool visual! I know translation g is tricky and I can imagine translating a poem would be the height of challenge as you would have to really uncover the layers of meaning in the words and then recreate that in another language. Very cool!

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