I need you right now,
But you've not there.
It makes me feel like,
You just don't care.
You said you'd be here,
Though it all.
So why are you watching,
As I fall?
I'm hurting so much,
But where are you?
I simply just don't,
have a clue.
Have you forgotten,
Who I am?
Or do you really,
Not give a damn?
Why am I doing this,
On my own?
All you have to do,
Is pick up the phone.
I just need to know,
that you are here.
To make this pain,
just disappear.
You're not though,
This much is true.
Maybe I'll give up,
On me and you?
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This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
There are so many loving souls, that are missing something here! ! Yes, you have to give up. Most of the human should have gone through this kind of situation.