Thursday, June 13, 2013

Where Be The Dreams Comments

Rating: 4.5

Where be the dreams
I had in my youth?
Those pale knighted legends
Defending the Truth,
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Ethereal Eden
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Lorraine Colon 13 June 2013

Very nice. Right to the point, has a good flow. And if you ever find the answer, please let me know. Well, I didn't mean for that to rhyme, but I'll let it stand. I enjoyed your poem.

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