Wednesday, March 7, 2018

Where Everything Is Threaded So Deep Into Each Other (Free Verse Sonnet) Comments

Rating: 5.0

(in answer to C. M. van der Heever)

The roses fold open their deep-red cups
where with a soft fragrance they do entice
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Gert Strydom
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Seamus O Brian 07 March 2018

Intriguing and absorbing imagery. There is a pastoral yet somber charm to this piece. I think you have struck the perfect chord of melancholia here.

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Johannesburg, South Africa
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