Sunday, March 22, 2015

Where Is My Home? Comments

Rating: 4.3

I am lost can you please help me?
I am locked in a cage someone set me free!
But even if you free me where will I go?
I will have to hide under your cemented shadow.
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Vani Agarwal
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Rajnish Manga 26 April 2017

I appreciate and share your concern for maintaining our bio-diversity and Eco-system so that not only the man but others lovely species could also survive many of which are at the verge of extinction. Thanks. ....my house that is lost in your dust I want back my home, whose boundaries are made of trust. Let's make the world a better place once more,

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Vani Agarwal 30 April 2017

Thank you for your kind words! -Vani

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Vani Agarwal 30 April 2017

Thank you for your kind words Sir! -Vani

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Anchal Dhanush Verma 15 June 2015

Will you become my friend.

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Vani Agarwal 30 April 2017

:)

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Chinedu Dike 23 March 2015

LET'S OPEN A NEW CHAPTER, OPEN A NEW DAWN! A lovely piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned with a call for Universal Brotherhood Of Man. A good poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Vani Agarwal 24 March 2015

Thanks! Its encouraging to see many like my poem

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Vani Agarwal 24 March 2015

Thanks!

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Ahatisham Alam 23 March 2015

All that is lost is not yours. Keep your relations in your strong hold. Enjoy the pain of life as it is faithful. Excellent Emotions. Keep up.

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Vani Agarwal 30 April 2017

Thank you Sir!

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 23 March 2015

Your notes under the poem were really helpful in understanding your feelings. Great write. Thanks for sharing this. (9)

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Vani Agarwal 30 April 2017

Thank you! !

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