Saturday, May 27, 2017

Where To Go. Comments

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Ever to destined to travel
A journey hitherto unknown place
The destination is a mystery
The destiny takes the roll of guide
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Gangadharan nair Pulingat..
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Jefferson Carter 27 May 2017

Gangadharan, this poem is almost incomprehensible to this American reader. You need to better master English before you compose any more verse. You also, since you seem to want to write poetry in English, read lots of good contemporary poets like Mary Oliver and Billy collins. If you'd like, check out my new website: jeffersoncarterverse.com Let me know how you like it. Yrs, JC

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