Where Your Eyes Take Me Poem by Guarded Heart

Where Your Eyes Take Me

Rating: 4.5


to look into your eyes
is to travel down a path
filled with you past happening

the sorrow you were in
when your mother went away

the pain that you have felt
by responsibility's wieght

the joy you have lived through
when you finally got away

and the happiness you knew
when you shrugged away you pain

i'm so glad to have known you
glad to set you free
and give you a taste of true delivery

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amanda Lukas 13 December 2005

Great tribute to someone who seems like a very special person. Just a suggestion: the second to last line maybe should read '...to be set free' instead of '...to set be free' Good poem.

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