Wherever Poem by Kirti Sharma

Wherever

Rating: 5.0


Blind fold my eyes,
and your hand in mine,
my steps in your shadow,
yes i can walk,
where ever you go..
You take me to the sunset,
take me to the sunrise,
the moon is beautiful,
the stars have their own life..
You can twirl me around,
and bend me twice,
every foot going with the rythm,
we can dance all night..
I can loose you in trees,
you can find me behind.
Like every finger longs you,
you can always touch mine..

Monday, November 9, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fabrizio Frosini 22 November 2015

your poem is a dance.. the dance of life.. Enjoyed. Thank you, Kirti

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Kirti Sharma 12 November 2015

Thank you so much... :)

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Fabrizio Frosini 10 November 2015

''Blindfold my eyes, and your hand in mine, my steps in your shadow yes i can walk, wherever you go'' - - AN ITALIAN TRANSLATION of your opening lines ***: '' Bendati ho gli occhi e la tua mano è nella mia - muovo i miei passi nella tua ombra così da poter andare ovunque tu vada '' ________________ *** (not a literal one)

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Ratnakar Mandlik 09 November 2015

Wonderful theme, beautiful rhyme and nice imagery. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Kirti Sharma 12 November 2015

thank you so much.. :)

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