Whiskey Lullaby Poem by Castellenas John

Whiskey Lullaby

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Whiskey lullaby

I watched her undress slowly. She had found me drinking whiskey alone at the Monterey Bay.I was drinking the whiskey and I was singing poetry to the Pacific.

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My great love, my great and terrible love.
You told me one.I have found you and do no fear dear Johnnie.
I will love and honor you forever and a day.
I remember you sweet Jenny,
your long legs and river blue eyes make come alive and wish.
Great love are like the storms of the wild sea.
Just become myth and tale for thelover of the sea and the kiss.
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She slapped my face and she told me. "Dear Poet, "The past is gone and you can't hold regret. You have sang the whiskey lullaby enough. Dead love is just tangle memory we must forget and create better ones. She took me to her home. She took her Summer dressoff slowly andshe took my clothing off. Her soft and warm body made the darkness becomes more kinder. She held me like a child and she sang songs of love to me.


"My December love, my Poet prince.
Live for me and forget the heaviness of yesterday.
Skin to skin,
mouth to mouth,
legs and arms must become twisted in new need and want.
Please dark Poet.
Live for me and please stay in Monterey with me my love.
Allow fingertips to dance on wanting skin and let's find the place where love can grow and we can
know sweet splendor and joy."
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I told her. You had been my savior for many months. You and Monterey make me write and create. I needed the whiskey. Poets and writers love the whiskey lullaby. You are right sweet Susan, damn drink and memories must end and I'm so thankful for you. Dear Susan, lets make no promises that we must break. Lets open new doors and places gently. Susan, you are a blessed gift to a undeserving man. I long to stay with you, as long as you need me.

John Castellenas/Coyote

Tuesday, March 12, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: forgiveness,love,sea,woman
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The learning of forgiveness, the gift of mercy.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bonaventure Onuabuchi 15 April 2019

You are quite good in narrative poems, I like the style.

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Dr Antony Theodore 25 March 2019

your long legs and river blue eyes make come alive and wish. Great love are like the storms of the wild sea. Just become myth and tale for thelover of the sea and the kiss. Every love experience is a myth. is it true? ? very fine poem. tony

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