Too Old To Die Young Poem by Castellenas John

Too Old To Die Young

Rating: 4.9


Almost 61 years old,
I lived in many places and had many lives.
Old man looking back at me in the mirror today.
I whispered,
too old to die young.



- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Once I knew the energy of youth,
once I told death,
not today.
Today I see my father's face, my father's eyes.
I learn the hard lessons, like him.
Now I know his lessons and I pray,
he had found some peace and salvation.
My old eyes are tire and I write some words,
old dad, I am too old to die young.



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Maybe we suppose to see with different eyes after traveling forever,
our world, chaos and craziness.
Grandfather told the grandchildren.
Slow down, listen and have some fun.
You will become old one day and you will wish,
you loved more, you danced more and you laughed more.
Yesterday man whispered, I am too old to die young.




Dancing Coyote

Saturday, May 11, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: aging,life,wisdom
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sekharan Pookkat 11 May 2019

Wow! Beautiful philosophical insight - I am too old to die young. add my 10+ Read my poems too if you prefer

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Castellenas John 13 May 2019

Thank you for reading I do appreciate.

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Kostas Lagos 11 May 2019

That's amazing! 10!

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Castellenas John 13 May 2019

Thank you Kostas. I appreciate the comment.

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Mahtab Bangalee 28 May 2019

too old to die young! wonderful expression but young yeah, young on the lap of juvenile poem cannot die................

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 22 May 2019

A profound and reflective poem on life, from youth to aging, which is a the normal course of all human beings like us. To everything there is a season, a time to be born and a time to die, as the Bible says. Yet during that period of living we all must breathe with purpose and not just age without reason and wait for death. You are here for a reason, and once you find that out - life will be precious to you - every second of it.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 20 May 2019

NO AGE TO DIE I AM NEARING 80 GUYS MUCH YOUNGER TO ME DIE EVERY DAY NO GOD KEEPS WATCH ONLY LOVE URSELF HAVE AND EAT WELL DON'T UNNECESSARILY SAVE WHAT FOR BUT WALK A MILE A DAY KEEP FIT INDIGESTION YOU WILL SUFFER NOT ANYONE ELSE NOR ME

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Luz Hanaii 18 May 2019

" Too old to die young" Strange but I feel younger as I get older. Nice work, much enjoyed.

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Chinedu Dike 18 May 2019

Insightful philosophical lines. A work of an intricate mind. Thanks for sharing, John.

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Castellenas John 28 May 2019

Thank you Chinedu. I appreciate the comment.

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