Monday, October 31, 2011

Whisky Mind Comments

Rating: 5.0

<Trickling down my throat with some sweat ease
this smooth taste of the flesh takes hold
as it glides down I can feel the warmth in my stomach
its amazing at how the body quivers at the thought
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Jason R Tschetter
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Vipins Puthooran 31 October 2011

It's a very good poem, @nd i like it very much, beautiful poetic depiction

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Vipins Puthooran 31 October 2011

It's a very good poem, @nd i like it very much, beautiful poetic depiction

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