mosebjadi mavis kotlolo

Rookie (1987 04 19 / Limpopo province at ZB(Mehlareng village))

Whispering.. In The Dark - Poem by mosebjadi mavis kotlolo

Whispering….in the dark

Just give yourself one minute
…..just one minute to listen
Listen very closely you will hear it
Listen very closely you will get the message

I can see that you still don’t hear the sound
The message is there in that whispering sound
…you should just listen and listen closely

Oh, I can see you are listening
….your listening very closely but you just can’t get it
I understand it’s because you are listening closely and
not concentrating

Don’t give up now you are getting there
Be patient and listen …and listen very closely
and concentrating

Can you hear the sound now?
Yeah, I can see a change on your face
Give it your all…..
Just listen for these last minutes,
You got the message loud and clear?

Yeah, I get it now ….its growing louder
No, its not its you… you are now listening very
Closely and concentrating

What is the message saying?
I now get it loud and clear
Its saying listen, learn and grow…
All along it was just a voice whispering in the dark

By Mavis Kotlolo

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  • (4/11/2006 2:28:00 PM)


    aw that was very sweet..I loved the sense of captiation gained from reading this..great job! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, April 11, 2006



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